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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

#happiness #life #factors
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For most of the people
happiness
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 is considered more desirable thing in their personal
life
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. Due to the nature of being happy makes it difficult to describe.
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, there are some initial factors which can thought to be crucial in acquiring
happiness
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.
However
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, to feel happy is
very important feeling
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a very important feeling
 of person`s
life
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,
this
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 very term is one of the most difficult to define and understand for people. I think the main reason for
this
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 is that the more people have, the more
happiness
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 views have. So that the
happiness
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 is relative conception. For one finding enough food for today is
happiness
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, but for another
person it
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person, it
 seems as piece of cake. The practical world is puzzling and the humankind wants more than they have. There are several factors that most people agree with these ways the one`s
life
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 can be thought as happy
life
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.
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, it is implausible to happy without
peaceful and safe home
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a peaceful and safe home
 and sufficient food
for
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to
 live. Not having something, especially
that is
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 basic or necessary for
life
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 is important in order to lead a pleasant
life
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. The
second
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 important thing to achieve
happiness
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 I think it could only be surrounded by relatives`
wo
the person or persons that; the one that
who
Wu
wow
 is really
love
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loving
 and value you. It always motivates you to live and to try to achieve something in your difficult
life
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. Some other key factors could be economical freedom, your hobbies, your lovely work and so on. To conclude,
happiness
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 is foremost essential part of our
lives
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life
 and we feel
this
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 emotion by linking it
with
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to
 our surrounding states and various stimulating factors.
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