You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Its
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It
is a
deabatable
open to doubt or debate
debatable
issue
,
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,
people buying
behvaiour
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
has suddenly change
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have suddenly changed
under the influence of eye
catch
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catching
advertisements.Companies
has
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have
only one motto to sell their products so they
hire celebarties
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hire, celebrities
hire celebrities
or
roles
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role
models to advertise
thir
of them or themselves
their
products.Which
generally effect
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generally affects
generally affect
the people buying behaviour.I
stronlgy
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
believe that
consumer
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the consumer
a consumer
consumers
buy
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buys
those things
,
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,
which they are not really need.
Fistly
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Firstly
,
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,
the all the companies want to sell their products like "hot cakes".They always tried to sell their
beound
farther along in space or time or degree
beyond
bonds
their limits.They always hire crickets or famous person
.
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.
Who can help enhance their selling level.
For
example for
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example, of
example of
beauty products advertise through the
beautyifull
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
beautifully
bountiful
girls and give a false opinion to
glow
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glowing
skin
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
a week.People get influence they buy if they really need or not.
Secondly
,
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,
these advertisements give birth to rate
rac
any competition
race
.Where
people speacillay
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people, especially
people especially
midddle
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
middle
class
want
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wants
to look more stylish and
richa
possessing material wealth
rich
rice
Rice
as
comapre
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compare
to the other people.Under
this
intention they
coantinully
seemingly without interruption
continually
spend money on wanted things.
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