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In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompained by an adult.What is your opinion about this?

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In certain parts of
United States
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the United States
, due to curfew teenagers cannot go out after a particular hour of the night without supervision of an adult. In my opinion,
this
 is justified
,
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,
 as adolescents are too young to keep themselves safe and secure all the times. To embark with, keeping teenagers confined to their homes during wee hours is beneficial for them. If they go out during night, they may get in contact with criminals and drug
peddlers
.
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.
 Most of the time drug mafia
target
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targets
 new customers to deliver their products from one place to another by providing them
ample amount
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an ample amount
 of money. While dong these kind of detrimental activities they find it
good way
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a good way
 to earn more in less time.As they are not aware about its repercussions.
For example
, in Uttar Pradesh there are
number
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a number
 of cases registered on children for drug trafficking
.
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.
 Most of them are not even aware about the crime that they committed. To curb
this
 menace, in US government is taking initiatives to save youth. On
otherhand
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the other hand
other hand
,
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,
 if teenagers are accompanied by an adult, there are less chances of criminals to approach them.
This
 protects children from evil eyes.
Adolescent
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The adolescent
 is
such
 age in which teenagers do not have knowledge about their good and bad.
Furthermore
, parents or guardians who are with their children come to know about their activities and can warm them when they cross their limits. To conclude along with my
opinion
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opinion, this
this
 curfew prevents teens from going out of their home late at night save them from getting indulged in to wrong activities. Since teens are too young to think about wrong and right, they need care and full attention of adults.
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