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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

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In recent years, a majority of people have to
struggling
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struggle
deal
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dealing
 with increasing living
cost
.
This
 essay will examine the effects
of of
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
this problems
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this problem
these problems
 and suggest several possible solutions. Increasing living
cost
affect
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affects
 both individuals and society in a diversity of ways.
Firstly
, dealing with higher costs of living, people have to spend more time and put more effort in their working,
for instance
second
-job.
Consequently
, people spend less time for leisure activities and exercising, leads them into some epidemic
such
 as overweight and obesity.
In addition
, being under a high pressure of maintaining a standard living may
leads
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lead
 these people into serious mental health problems,
for example
 depression and anxiety.
Secondly
, higher living
cost
 means that rising in
financial
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the financial cost
cost
for
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of
 business.
As a result
, companies tend to
reducing
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reduce
have reduced
be reduced
 their workers, motivate unemployment to be even worse.
Furthermore
, lacking of money for paying bills invisible force people to become crimes, stealing property to afford a customary living.
However
, there are several solutions can solve
this issues
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this issue
these issues
. People should learn how to manage and control their money wisely,
instead
 of wasting it on useless things.
Furthermore
, government
have
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has
 to differ laws and reduce taxations for residents, helping them to maintain a typical life in
this
 costly contemporary society.
Also
,
administration
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the administration
 should encourage creating more jobs, providing people work to earn
salary
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a salary
.
As a result
, lacking of money for common life
can be lessen
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can lessen
 or even disappear. In conclusion, rising
cost
 of living affect individuals and society in various
way
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ways
, from mental health problems
to
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of
with
 unemployment and
criminal
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crime
.
Otherwise
, providing financial course and reducing taxations can help to eliminate
this issues
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this issue
these issues
.
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