In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Advances in medical science are resulting in prolonged lifespans but there is a knock-on effect

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services with many hospitals struggling to cope with an

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populace. Many countries enjoy the benefits of free or subsidised national public

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services.

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, there are some within senior

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management who claim that

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provision will become unsustainable, and I firmly agree that changes need to be made in order to reflect

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changing reality. Despite the notion that

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should be ‘free’,

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care is predominantly funded by the taxpayer. To give a specific example, a recent report in my country established that almost 40% of the nation’s tax spending is distributed to

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and some 80% of that figure is reserved for treating the elderly.

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is a disproportionate amount of money which has greatly increased the burden on the state and existing funding is no longer sufficient to meet these needs.

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the standard of care that can be provided as shown by numerous negative media reports about the conditions

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both staff and patients. If we want quality

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, clearly

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financial burden needs to be alleviated. One way to do so would be to increase the contributions made by citizens through increased taxation.

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governments could encourage those who can afford it to take up private

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arrangements. By switching to a private model, the well-off can afford a higher quality of care,

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at the same relieving pressure on public services for those who do not have the means to go private. One thing is for certain, an ageing population has increased the pressure on existing

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provision. If we are going to maintain the standards of

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that we are used to, more funding needs to be found either through taxation

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alternative forms of provision should be considered.

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, standards will fall and people’s lives will be put at risk.