You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
Both figures illustrate the UK's
last
year
Change noun form
year's
crime
information. Line
graph describes the Correct article usage
The line
relation
between Replace the word
relationship
crime
and age
, whereas
pie
chart Correct article usage
the pie
demonstrate
the percentage of Change the verb form
demonstrates
crimes
.
To begin
with a line graph, it
deals the Correct pronoun usage
apply
crime
with ages between 0-60. The age
below 8 are often children never committed to Replace the word
aged
crime
. Crime
starts at the age
of 12 and rose up to 80 thousand for
20 Change preposition
over
year
old Fix the agreement mistake
years
age
. However
, it started declining after age
20. But still
some of the Add a comma
,still
crimes
are committed till age
60.
Next
pie chart diagram highlights the types of Correct article usage
The next
crimes
in percentage. There are total 4
types of Change preposition
of 4
crime
are involved. Firstly
, violent crime
has 46 % and it is the most committed crime
. Secondly
, property
has 23%. Add an article
the property
Moreover
property Add a comma
,Moreover
crime
is almost half of
violent. Following that, drug and public order Change preposition
apply
has
22% and 9%.
Change the verb form
have
Overall
, Drug and public order crimes
are nowhere near as much committed crime
as violent
and property. The most Replace the word
violence
crime
committed age
for crime
is between 12-28.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, age, crimes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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