Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in a country where the language is being spoken. What is your opinion about this?

Well it
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Well, it
is true that learning different types of languages is necessary for the individual growth and
also
for a country for
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
benefit and development.
people
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People
believe that it's important to speak another
language but
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language, but
only in
country not
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the country, not
the country not
countries not
in
place
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places
the place
where they live
.
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.
According to my
perception learning
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perception, learning
second
language is equally beneficial and it can be described in my upcoming paragraph. As we live in India so
,
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,
in our country people's from
different place
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a different place
or religion is living and
everyone
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everyone's
speech their own native speaker and they
also
tried another
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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