These days, scientists can tell whether a child will become a criminal or not by examining the child at the age of three. Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?

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It is believed, that nowadays it can

bee

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

proven if children will

comite

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

commit

crimes in the

future

by examining them

ate

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

the age of three. In my opinion, I

dont

do not

don't

believe that anyone can predict a child´s behaviour in the feature while they are still learning to grow up.

First

of all, all humans are

diferent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

inspite

we may have e

somethings

Suggestion

some things

in common, we act and think differently,

therefore

, there should not be any kind of judgment. Especially when you are a child. Just because some kids have a

thought

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thoughtful

backround

a person's social heritage: previous experience or training

background

and a bad

enviormente

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

, that does not mean you are going to be a criminal in the

future

For example

, there are many famous figures that come from a bad

enviorment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

when

ther

people in general

they

were little kids but turned out an amazing person.

Secondly

, anyone can change and hope never dies, and we as a

comunity

a group of people living in a particular local area

community

can help these kids who are going threw a

rought

having or caused by an irregular surface

rough

patch. I believe that anyone can help and prevent from kids

comiting

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

committing

crimes in the

future

, and there are a lot of programs who help prevent

such

thing from happening. Take

for example

the amount programs who help these children go

for

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another way and talk with them and help each one resolve their problems. To summarize,

refers to the speaker or writer

dont

do not

don't

agree at all with the scientists who predict

childrens

Suggestion

children's

future

. I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

crime is not a part of us, and if we act like a

comunity

a group of people living in a particular local area

community

and help each other we can prevent kids from getting in trouble.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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human nature
socio-economic conditions
upbringing
early intervention
guidance
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supportive environment
nurturing environment
positive role models
mentors
rehabilitation
reintegration
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These days, scientists can tell whether a child will become a criminal or not by examining the child at the age of three. Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?