Some people think that it is more effective for student to study in groups, while other believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Education is the key element of human life as it is very much required to live and lead the life. It is well said that, "Knowledge is Wisdom". Here, knowledge need not necessarily be only that which shall be inborn but

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developed by an individual through studies. Right from our childhood, we

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a lot for which we have to focus on what we learn, in order to keep them into practice, in times of need. Some folks like loneliness while studying as they cannot concentrate on studies, even in case of small disturbance. Their mind gets diverted so easily and immediately on the other side.

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, when a kid of 5 years is going through the rhymes, and if at the same time, the kid's family is watching a daily serial, or playing any music, definitely, the child stops studying and starts dancing or listening to those words in the television serial.

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is new but unique. In fact, an enthusiastic spirit in them think about the latter. The zeal to know and understand everything will make them go on these perspectives. While some others, immerse in their world of learning, even if they are surrounded by a group of thousand people.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

364 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diverse perspectives
comprehension
retention
collaboration
communication skills
peers
accountable
individual learning styles
self-discipline
autonomy
isolation
gaps in understanding
peer input
discussion
clarify doubts

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Some people think that it is more effective for student to study in groups, while other believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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