You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord . In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear
Mr.
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Ross, I hope
this
letter finds you well. My name is Patricia Recacho and I have been renting one of your properties
at
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in
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Toronto for one year so far. I live here with my husband and two years old son, as you may
know
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we have been having a nice experience in
this
city and in your apartment as well, but
unfortunally
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unfortunately
today I would like to describe
you
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a sad situation we are facing. Since the winter has started, we are having many problems with our sofa and especially with our son's bed. It
is seems
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that most of the furniture present some moisture. As you may
know
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this
can be bad for
healthy
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and especially
on
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for
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the
youngs
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. I would like to ask you to provide some solution for the furniture, I believe you could hire some
wood worker
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woodworker
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to apply some treatment on the wood or maybe you could replace the furniture for new ones. Hope to hear from you soon. Best regards, Patricia Recacho.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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