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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money.Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.

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There are people who support the idea that having an enjoyable
job
 is more important than the high salary one, but others contradict
this
 opinion and suggest that people should work for high paying jobs because it makes our professional and personal lives easier.
Although
 the ideal situation would be to have a high salary work that we enjoy,
this
 is not possible for everyone. It's more important to consider the fact that some people have a limited
job
 choice because of education, poverty, and other material compensations. Some people spend an obscure amount of money on absurd things without thinking twice.
However
, they could manage a more preferable
job
 with fewer work hours so they could spend more time with friends and family. I've seen from my experience that in affluent families father is the primary source of
income
 and who works countless hours and rarely sees his children. I personally think that
this
 is not a delightful lifestyle and it would be better if he found a
job
 with less
income
 that permits them to spend more time at home. Contrarily, life is much effortless when we have no problem in our financial lives and can afford anything we want anywhere, anytime without thinking if we are able to buy it. Most of the times people who are born in successful and wealthy families often become the rich ones themselves. High earnings
also
 give us access to a longer, healthier life because our
income
 allows us to do so, something low salary does not possess. To conclude
this
, In my opinion, it is more important to have a
job
 you enjoy if it does not have the consequences of having less time to be with your family. In my point of view, it's not a big problem to have a
job
 with low
income
, but the problem is that we spend too much money on needless things, and if manage our finances carefully, we could get the best of each.

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