Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Many people claim that, if you are fed up with your daily routine, must go for holidays or visit a place you like the most. In ancient time it was difficult for people to travel just for fun, but now the situation is totally different. The world has become
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a global village
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the internet
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give something useful or necessary to
provide
provided
provides
us all the information so that people
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nowadays want
to explore new and unfamiliar places like the Sahara desert, Antarctic and Mount Everest.
This
essay will describe the pros and cons of visiting
such
places.
First
of all
,
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have played
an important role to make people more influenced about
such
places. When youngsters and mid ages will see the pictures of these places on
internet
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the internet
they become excited to go there, without knowing the advantages and disadvantages. There are many advantages of visiting Sahara desert and Antarctic.
Firstly
, people get a chance to experience different kinds of weather.
Secondly
, they learn how to survive with hurdles. They learn to live with groups of people in their camp and
also
cook food for themselves.
Thirdly
, they are making wonderful memories.
This
cannot be denied that, problems and hateful situations could be faced by us. On the one
hand we
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hand, we
are enjoying an amazing
trip but
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trip, but
on the other
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hand there comes an unexpected situation who
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makes
the scenario change. Sometimes people are not ready health wise to face extreme weather so they become sick.
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they want to be the part of trip till
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the end, but
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they are not able to. In conclusion, visiting the places where the climate is different from our homeland, it's hard to survive there so that, if you feel that you are capable to handle the worse situation, why not go and explore the world and if you are unsure do not go for it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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