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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

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Teenagers are the future of
world
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the world
. Making it mandatory for every adolescent to work voluntarily
for
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in
local community
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the local community
local communities
.
Accept space
.
This
 essay undoubtedly agrees
to
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with
this
 fact that
this
 will lead in their personnel development and exposure of practical world.
Moreover
, it is
also undeniable fact
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also an undeniable fact
 that having an extra hand will result in
exponentially
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exponential
 uplifting society by fulfilling its needs. Helping the neighbourhood never goes in vain. Children are energetic and have a tendency for innovation of ideas, which helps them
making
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make
to make
proper candidate
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a proper candidate
 for
this
 job.
For example
, assisting in construction of old age home or it can be as simple as aiding
a
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an
 elderly to cross the road. Society these days are lacking social workers and with young ones to offer them free services can lead in accomplishing their goals.
Hence
, it will be
welfare
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the welfare
for
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of
 all public living nearby. Individual advantage of giving care to the persons in need will help teenagers for their self-actualisation and
also
 will encounter actual life. These
situation
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situations
 must be shown to witness the practicality of the world, so that they can learn which will indulge hugely gaining of experience. To cite an example,
teen
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a teen
 is the age where
child
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the child
a child
 is mostly involved in
there
of them or themselves
their
 studies and taking a step outside it and interacting with public problems will help them to tackle
similar situation
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a similar situation
similar situations
 in future.
Therefore
, adolescents should be made to work on local vicinity. To recapitulate the suffice facts, it's can be said that making children obligatory to work at
this
 age will certainly help the needy ones and
also
 embark their life on right track.
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