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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

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In recent years, modern families tend to be not closer anymore. In
this
 essay, I am going to give reasons for explaining
this
 unfortunate truth, and suggest what can be done for helping family members to have more
time
 together. Nowadays, dealing with busy and pressure life, more and more people spend less
time
 for their
time
, leads to the broken of family closeness. Adults usually work all day, from early morning to midnight, provide a route to behave too formally in
family
Suggestion
the family
families
a family
 because of lacking of
time
 being together.As an example, a typical family in a developed society
just spend
Suggestion
just spends
 1/15 of their
time
 for family activities.
Furthermore
, in
this
 competitive community, it is forced that people have to work as much as they can, making
they
objective case of they
them
 too tired when return back home and just want to relax, not confiding or entertaining with their children.
As a result
, families are
become
Suggestion
becoming
 more and more detached.
However
, there are some solutions for
this
 problem,
such
 as spend less
time
 for working. A research pointed out that human often wasting
time
 in office for chatting with colleagues or cleaning their inbox. If adults can use their
time
 more wisely, they will save valuable
time
 for being with family.
In addition
, aware the paramount of together
time
 will motivate parents to be at home on
time
, which is
benefit
Suggestion
beneficial
 for educating children, according to an adviser. Altogether, adults should spend at least 2 hours for family per day to build up a happy household. In conclusion, there are many
causes
an occurrence of something
cases
 leads to
standoffishness
 in modern family.
Otherwise
, if family members recognize and acknowledge the importance of closeness, they may spend a little bit of
time
 in their busy life to being together.
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