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The impact of digital transformation on the buying behavior of tourists – a study conducted on Swiss inbound tourists to Sri Lanka

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Digitalization
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Digitalisation
 is the incorporation of digital technologies and data to change business operations (Bloomberg, 2018). In
tourism
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,
digitalization
the administration of digitalis for the treatment of certain heart disorders
digitalisation
 provides an opportunity to increase the market reach and improve the efficiency of operations. At a collective level, the digital transformation of the
tourism
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industry
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aids to
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aids, to
 develop and modify products, improve communication between the stakeholders and access to real-time data to monitor the performance. Despite the challenges the
tourism
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 sector faced in 2019, Sri Lanka has reached the revised target of tourists’ arrival
for
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in
 2019 of approximately 1.9
Mn
the force of workers available
men
 as of 31st December 2019 (Lanka Business Online, 2020). As stated by Secretary of the World
Tourism
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 Organization (UNWTO), the latest developments in technology are crucial for the
tourism
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industry
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, not merely in terms of interchange of data and know-how but
also
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 in terms of web/mobile application development and methods to integrate sustainability in the
industry
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 (Unwto.
org
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Org
, 2017). The usage of digital devices has increased considerably over the
last
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 decade.
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, everyone has access to information at the fingertips. Nowadays,
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 depend greatly on mobile applications and digital platforms when planning their holidays and making reservations due to convenience (Hertzfeld, 2018).
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, the
industry
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 is required to accept and adapt to these changes in technology in order to increase sales growth. The leisure
industry
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 is a fragmented
industry
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 without a major player, and a large fraction of the service providers consists of SMEs. Sectors within the
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industry
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industry, such
such
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 as transportation, lodging, food and beverage, entertainment and service providers are faced with various advantages and limitations with regard to
digitalization
the administration of digitalis for the treatment of certain heart disorders
digitalisation
. Intellectual ability and competencies of the personnel, access to funding and other assets, the levels of adaptability to technology and responsiveness vary among businesses.

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