You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear
Mr.
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Jeff, I am Sumant, staying in your apartment along with other
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flatmates
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flat mates
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flatmates
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in Brighton.
This
letter is to convey
you
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the
problem
I am facing with hot water geysers in the flat.
Although
last
week you had sent few technicians for a fix, which really fixed for a while,
but
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again the
problem
started occurring from yesterday. I do feel helpless because I myself do not have any equipment to fix the geysers and I do not have knowledge about electrical devices. I am totally dependent on you and your service here. Without hot water and any
heat producing
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instruments, I am getting health issues too, being from
warmer
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country.
Solution
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to fix
this
problem
is to get
service
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of a knowledgeable person, who can fix the
problem
and visit again after 3 days and again after a week and 15 days to re-check and re-validate the solution’s rigidity. Please send
such
technician at earliest, so that I won’t suffer any more. Thanking you in advance. Regards,
Sumant
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to bring to your attention...
  • I wish to formally complain about...
  • Despite several attempts to repair...
  • The absence of hot water and heating...
  • This ongoing issue has caused considerable inconvenience...
  • As a result, it has become increasingly difficult to...
  • I urge you to take immediate action...
  • I propose that a specialist be consulted...
  • Should this problem persist...
  • I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience...
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