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More and more people these days overwork. Overwork has caused several problems. What are they and how to tackle this problems?

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These days, people in modern life increasingly overload because of working too much.
However
,
overload
Suggestion
overloads
 has lead to many issues. There are two main problems, limitation in both physical and mental and being a positive person. Possible solutions would be spending
time
 on outdoor activities and look on the bright side.
First
, one of the main problems is that overwork can cause limitation in both physical and mental. If they usually have to get high pressures at
work
, their body would alert them by some signs
such
 as sore eyes, headache, weak memory, so on.
This
 condition lasts long every day that
become
Suggestion
becomes
 diseases
such
 as cardiovascular disease, obesity, so on.
As a result
, they
can not
can not
cannot
work
 effectively.
For example
, when they
work
 regularly without taking a break, their brand would run out of energy and
then
 it is exhausted, so they
can not
can not
cannot
 concentrate to make a good decision as well as complete works in right
time
. To tackle
this
 issue they should spend more
time
 to support outdoor activities including sport club or, hang out with friends in
weekend
Suggestion
a weekend
the weekend
 or take a trip on vacation. Thanks to some activities, they will be relaxed and recharged the battery for the
next
 challenge.
Second
, another problem to consider is being a
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
 person. They always hope to do well and when the failure at
work
 happens, they have to deal with severe
stress including
Accept comma addition
stress, including
disapointment
a feeling of dissatisfaction that results when your expectations are not realized
disappointment
 from employer, high risk of the sack, so
on
Suggestion
with
.
As a result
, they may be
depression
Suggestion
depressed
.
For instance
, if they are
leader
Suggestion
the leader
leaders
a leader
, their projects of
team
Suggestion
the team
 would decline because they would be
frightend
Suggestion
pretending
pretend
frightened
 to suggest a resolution. One possible solution is for workers to look on the bright side and they should receive some advice from employees to escape
this
 bad mood.
Therefore
, they are able to solve any challenges and get more confident and optimistic in life. In a
nutsell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
nut-shell
, exhaust can cause some
issues including
Accept comma addition
issues, including
 limitation in both physical and mental and being a positive person. Many solutions are spending
time
 on outdoor activities and looking on the bright side. It is suggested that they
should arrange
Suggestion
should arrange a time
time
 to
work
 and rest reasonably in order to enough health for
work
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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