Some people think that students who don’t take a break in studies between the high school and the university are at disadvantage compared to students who travel and work after high school before further continuing their education. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in our competitive world, to succeed, knowledge from

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and

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is not enough.

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, students who study

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the

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to

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university get

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university, get

fewer benefits and contribute less too, compared to those

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students

who travel or work and get

experience

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and skills before going high. There are two following reasons to support for my opinion. I refer to the

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of people who study from

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to

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as ‘

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A’ and the other

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– as ‘

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B’.

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, at

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and

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, what

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A gains

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are

almost entirely

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,

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and

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. Of course,

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is very

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

,

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, you can’t do everything with just

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. You must have

praticeable

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

experience

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.

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is what

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A lack very much.

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in the

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or fourth year at

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,

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A can be apprentices in some companies, to help them approach their future jobs, they aren’t trained well because of the short time spent working. And the real job is still very strange to them. After graduating, without

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,

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A students can’t accomplish their work perfectly.

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, it takes them time and money to keep up with other experienced students and they may be scorned.

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,

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A students can contribute less than

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B who

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has

the two

most important

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more important

things: skills and

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.

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, as

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A students are contributing less, they surely get less benefit.

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, many companies which employ people in

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A have to train them from

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the ground

-up. These companies take

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cost

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of

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A’s

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

as

salary to reduce the risk of their employees leaving

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for

other companies after being trained. So, less benefits are unavoidable and certain, Whereas

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B members are more loyal and effective workers. They

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have useful

experience

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and skills.

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, their education is the same as or even higher than that of

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A. As the result,

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B gets more benefits absolutely. In conclusion, I think a student should travel or work before going to the

university

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. That way, not only will they have basic knowledge but

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skills and

experience

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which

are

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is

useful for them to get a good job and have a brilliant future.