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The maps below show the centre of the town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of the town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two maps show the layout
plan
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of
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present
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the present
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 and future development of the heart of the
town
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Islip
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of Islip
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. Many changes have been made
in
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to
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 the new
plan
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of
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for
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 the
town
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. Some places are eliminated and some places are newly added to make the
town
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 advance.
According to
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 the new
plan
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, the
town
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 will have an oval shape. The dual carriageway will take place and the countryside will be removed.
On
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 the north, the shops will together form a shopping centre and the remaining place will be acquired by the bus station, car parking and a new housing system. The main will become a footpath. To the south, the school will be expanded,
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 the park will be smaller. In the present
plan
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, the school and park are not connected but in the future, the road in front of the school will be extended to join the park creating
the
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 dual carriageway.
Also
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,
the
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 new housing system will be introduced.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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