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Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#driver #education #habits #punishments #offences
Road security has become more and more a
relevat
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
 issue in our societies and for
this
 reason people are discussing whenever it is necessary to improve the driving preparation, especially for younger generation, or it is better to set up stronger sanctions. Some of them believe that a more accurate
driver
 education is needed to sort out more results. I agree with
this
 positive approach because I think that we need to prevent
car
 accidents. Researches in many different fields have shown that there is a human attitude
that is
 very strong: if you are
tring
hard to endure
trying
 to make someone doing something is much easier to show him how to do, and not just to impose him a negative
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, like a sanction.
For instance
, children at school learn faster if they receive positive inputs and not just punishments if they do wrong. On the other side, some time people are doing the wrong things because they do not know the
conseguences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
 of their actions. For
this
 reason, I deeply believe that we need a deeper sensibility from drivers and the only way to improve driving habits is to give a more complete
driver
 education to people getting a driving licence.
On the other hand
, punishments are necessary and they should
also
 be applied in case of grave
car
 accidents. In any case, sanctions are not particularly helpful to prevent
car
 accidents, but they can only
obliged
Suggestion
oblige
people
Suggestion
the people
 to observe more
stricly
restricted to something
strictly
 the rules. In conclusion, I believe that a more complete
driver
 education, especially to young
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 getting a
driver
 licence, would contribute to improve driving habits and to reduce
car
 accidents. Punishment
are
Suggestion
is
 necessary and they should be stronger for heavier wrong conducts, but they do not contribute to prevention.
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