Sports programmes are hugely popular on television nowadays. But some people argue that these programmes are to blame for the poor health of many young people who prefer to watch rather than part take in physical activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our modern society,
phisical
activity is involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
gettig
more and more important because of the relevance the act of acquiring something
getting
on
the quality of life. From Suggestion
of
to
one
side, obesity is one
of the main factors of mortality in developed countries, while younger people practice less sport
than in the past. To this
extend, some peole
are arguing that (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
television
have had
a bad impact and Suggestion
has had
in particular
people prefer watching sport
programs rather than do it Suggestion
sports
themself
.
In my opinion, reflexive form of "them"
themselves
this
is not true for two reasons.
The first
one
is that people watching at sport
programmes in
TV are often Suggestion
on
also
practicing the same activity, even if they are not athletes. If you have a hobby, for instance
, like a sport
, probably you would also
like to be updated and to follow your favorites
player or team. For something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
this
kind of watcher, sports programmes on television
have no impact on their health
. On the contrary
, they increase their interest in sport
.
On the other hand
, if you are a lazy person, probably, you will prefer to follow a sport
programme rather than take part in a specifical
activity. In any case, (sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
this
people
is not interested in Suggestion
person
sport
, so the main problem in not represented by watching television
, but by the lack of interest. In these cases, a better education will provide the necessary information to tackle obesity and avoid health
diseases.
In conclusion, if it is undeniable that television
contributes to the bad habits of the moder
life and it is belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
mother
one
the main causes of health
diseases, such
as obesity, it is also
true that people practising a sport
are also
intersted
in watching programmes related having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
on
their Suggestion
to
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport
. For these reason
, I do not agree with the statement that nowadays Suggestion
reasons
sport
programmes on television
should be blamed and are damaging population health
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