Nowadays there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all arounf the world . What are the causes and solutions of this problem .

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it is certainly true that in present days our nation is facing
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a plethora
of problems due to polluted environment
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The
amount
of rubbish is one of them
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Which is increasing at
alarming rate
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an alarming rate
and
this
problem is
also
burning question of the day
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Therefore
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this
essay will shed light not only its
causes but
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causes, but
also
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on
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suitable
solutions in
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the upcoming paragraphs
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a doubt
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the
amount
of waste which we produce has been increased
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The fundamental reason of
this
problem is our customer culture
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People are continuously purchasing abundance of new products
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Which leads to rubbish in society because when something
breaks
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breaks, then
then
we throw it away and buy new one
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Moreover everyday
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Moreover, everyday
people come across numerous advertisements which attract them
yowards
near
towards
itself
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Packaging is
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an imperative part
imperative part
iterative part
of selling. So companies are doing extra packaging for
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making
them
of them or themselves
their
products attractive which help them to earn
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a lucrative amount
amount
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Apart from that
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in 21st
century mostly
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century, mostly
folks ate addicted to eat junk food and undoubtedly,
most of food is
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most food is
sold in non biodegradable plastic packaging
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All in
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all, the
amount
of household waste is growing. There are tremendous ways which will help to prevent
this
derious
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
menace
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Firstly
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regime
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the regime
should spread knowledge among
publicc
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the public
public
through seminars
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lectures and advertisements. Apart from that
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they should provide dustbins in every locality free of cost as well as they should teach public about 3R schemes
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Moreover companies
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Moreover, companies
should make
last
longer goods which
will helps
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will help
to reduce the extra buying habits of individuals as well as government should be stricter about those industries which produce waste and put
legal limit
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legal limits
a legal limit
on packaging
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In accordance with the
afarementioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
viewpoints it is lucidly clear that
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although
there are great numbers of reasons which are increasing the rubbish but it still can be
contolled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
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Regime
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public and companies should seriously pay more attention in
this
matter.

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