1.Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everyone knows that excess of everything is bad,

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if we take

sugar

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in excess

amount

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then

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it is harmful for health. Some people think that it is the sole

responsibility

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of the higher authorities to control it,

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others hold the view that it is the

responsibility

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of a human. In my opinion, both approaches

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the ideal solution to solve the problem.

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with

former 's view

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the former ' s view

, the governments should take some initiatives

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like they can check the content and composition of sugary products before marketing of any sugary items.

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, the state authorities should aware the people

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take

the

sugar

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in proper

amount

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and

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tell them about the health related issues due to over consuming of

sugar

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instace

an occurrence of something

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, they can organise awareness camps in which people come to know about

health hazards

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the health hazards

of taking too much

sugar

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. As

regarding

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regards

to later view, it is

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the

responsibility

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of an individual to take

sugar

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, the people can

chek

examine so as to determine accuracy, quality, or condition

check

the

amount

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of

sugar

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before buying any sugary product if there is more

amount

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of

sugar

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in it

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then

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than

they can avoid it.

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, if people do not have a will to

cotrol

power to direct or determine

control

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it, then

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any government

can not

can not

cannot

do nothing

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so it is the

responsibility

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of an individual too as well as government. In recapitulate, both methods discuss above can provide the relief to

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issue

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but it is my opinion that if a person

can not

can not

cannot

take it seriously

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nothing is done by

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the government

there.