Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

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a number

of debates among various walks of life.I believe that

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disappearing of particular

species

of animals and

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buildings for carrying on industrial labor

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points

are important, it is not the heart of

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matter

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mother

of

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of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

problems. On the one hand

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many think that some animals and plants make an important role in

nature

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more to say

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by loosing some specious of them, the balance in the

nature

may be lost.

For instance

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some research in USA

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elucidates

the fact that loosing some

species

of plants lead to have more

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anything that contributes causally to a result

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factors

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of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

problems is to protect some

species

of animals and plants. Looking at the other side

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the coin, there are lots of essential issues in

nature

that we have to

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as lack of water sources

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green gas pollution and

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a large number or amount

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of

such

matters, it is obvious that there are lots of

fundemental

serving as an essential component

fundamental

problems in

nature

that we have to be

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worried

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(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

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them rather than

lossing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

loosing

leasing

some

species

of animals and

palnts

buildings for carrying on industrial labor

plants

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For instance

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in Iran

that is

air pollution which

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causes

lots of

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danger

dangers

dangerous

hazard to people and

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water pollution that makes sea food unhealthy and

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would be lead to serious matters for human.In my opinion

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even though

it is important to make obstacle for loosing of any

species

of animals and plants in

nature

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do not play

does not paly

does not play

doesnot play

the main role in

enviromental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

problem. So, looking seriously at all aspects of

enviromental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

issues is

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

to protect it. To conclude

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there are valid arguments on both sides of

controversy

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the controversy

a controversy

controversies

.On balance,

however humans

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however, humans

should protect all aspects of

nature

, the

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being of crucial importance

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a geometric element that has position but no extension

point

in

this

area is to be sensitive about current and valid problems in

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an environment

environment

the environment

which can cause

hazard

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a hazard

for human.