Success is solely depend on hard work but others believed that it depends on luck how far do you agree or disagree?

Success
means the ability to turn our dreams and goals into the reality, and for that we have to
work
hard. In the contemporary era, there is heated argument over the issue
that is
success
is only depends on hard
work
, but to be
a
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an
honest
luck
has
play
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played
vital role
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a vital role
to obtain
success
in life. A lion's share of the society
favoures
promote over another
favours
favoured
it.
However
the rest
go
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goes
averse it. The following
parargraph
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraph
paragraphs
would shed light on both the approaches before making final judgement. I do not see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons.
First
and foremost,
sucess
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the success
success
successes
achieved by the contribution of both hard
work
and
luck
. There are some people believe that
success
is only in
matter
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a matter
matters
of
luck
. By
this
implemention
the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
of thought they could not
work
at all and wait for their
luck
.
Secondly
, people
also
create more dependency on
horoscope
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the horoscope
for engagement in terms of works.
For instance
, check their daily horoscope and pretend that today
is lucky day
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is a lucky day
or not.
This
kind of thought directly
affect
produce
effect
on
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
Thor
capbilities
the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally
capabilities
of
work
and
also
feel
demotivated
when they faces failures in their life. Adding
further
, hard
work
is only worked when there is
luck
availbility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
to
obtained
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obtain
pleasure and
success
in life. To substantiate, there is
a
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an
epitome of a
thomas
Welsh poet (1914-1953)
Thomas
thomas'
Thomas'
edision
the form in which a text (especially a printed book) is published
editions
who invented
a
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an
electric bulb after the
failling
the entering of a legal document into the public record
filing
falling
filling
the 100 times. On the logger's head some critics go
aganist
in contact with
against
the above discussed
asserations
financial transactions at a brokerage; having to do with the execution of trades and keeping customer records
operations
. But I am of opinion that we
should does
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should do
a
hardwork
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hard work
with positive thinking and approach without consideration of
drawback
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the drawback
of failures. There
is
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are
famous lines about
success
, " Don't run for the
success
, only follow the
excellence
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excelling
excellent
power of our mind that will runs the
success
behind us."

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