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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others ,however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #health #sports #facilities #effect #measures
The graph illustrates how much three
café
s (Pete’s Café, Central Coffee Shop and Café Luna) earned per month between January and June. Overall, it can be seen that both Pete’s Café and Café Luna increased their monthly earnings over the period. In comparison, after an initial peak, Central Coffee Shop’s earnings had decreased dramatically by June. During January to March, Pete’s Café and Café Luna maintained relatively steady monthly earnings of around €1500 and €2000 respectively.
On the other hand
, Central Coffee Shop’s earnings shot up from €2500 in January to €3500 in February, after which they slowed to €2000 in March. From March onwards, Pete’s Café began to increase its takings steadily and had more than doubled its profits by June, overtaking both the other
café
s in April and finishing the graph with the highest figures (€3500). The earnings for Café Luna continued to increase gradually, finishing with slightly more than in January. By April, Central Coffee Shop’s earnings had continued to decline and were less than both the other
café
s at just €1500 per month, a rate which remained steady until June. It would appear that Central Coffee Shop’s initial popularity began to decline from February onwards and
this
 had a beneficial effect on the figures for the other two
café
s, particularly Pete’s.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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