The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
expenditure
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household
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households
Japan
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Malaysia
in terms of five different categories in 2010.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
both nations allocated most of their budget Linking Words
on
housing, food and other goods and services, Change preposition
to
while
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care and transport Use synonyms
were
accounted for Unnecessary verb
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least
amount. Correct article usage
the least
However
, the figure Linking Words
of
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for
health
and transport in Use synonyms
Japan
was exactly double than Use synonyms
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of Malaysian’s
Malaysian’s
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Malaysia’s
expenditure
.
In Use synonyms
Malaysia
, 34% of the total budget was Use synonyms
being
spent on housing, which is the largest portion of household Unnecessary verb
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expenditure
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Malaysia
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On the other hand
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sector was responsible Linking Words
21
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for 21
in
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of
Japan
. Again, the greatest portion of spending was Use synonyms
other
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on other
good
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goods
Japan
, at 29%, Use synonyms
while
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Malaysia
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this
figure was Linking Words
a
lower than Correct article usage
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Japan
, at 26%. In terms of food, both countries spent relatively Change preposition
in Japan
similar
, 24% for Change the word
similarly
Japan
and for Use synonyms
Malaysia
it is 27%.
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Furthermore
, the lowest portion of Linking Words
expenditure
was Use synonyms
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health
care in both countries. People in Change preposition
on health
Malaysia
spent 3% on Use synonyms
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health
sector and transport represented 10% of the total household budget. These figures were exactly doubled in Add an article
the health
Japan
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