The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
expenditure
of household
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households
Japan
and Malaysia
in terms of five different categories in 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
both nations allocated most of their budget on
housing, food and other goods and services, Change preposition
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while
health
care and transport were
accounted for Unnecessary verb
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least
amount. Correct article usage
the least
However
, the figure of
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for
health
and transport in Japan
was exactly double than Change preposition
of Malaysian’s
Malaysian’s
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Malaysia’s
expenditure
.
In Malaysia
, 34% of the total budget was being
spent on housing, which is the largest portion of household Unnecessary verb
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expenditure
in Malaysia
. On the other hand
, this
sector was responsible 21
% Change preposition
for 21
in
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of
Japan
. Again, the greatest portion of spending was other
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on other
good
and services in Fix the agreement mistake
goods
Japan
, at 29%, while
in Malaysia
, this
figure was a
lower than Correct article usage
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Japan
, at 26%. In terms of food, both countries spent relatively Change preposition
in Japan
similar
, 24% for Change the word
similarly
Japan
and for Malaysia
it is 27%.
Furthermore
, the lowest portion of expenditure
was health
care in both countries. People in Change preposition
on health
Malaysia
spent 3% on health
sector and transport represented 10% of the total household budget. These figures were exactly doubled in Add an article
the health
Japan
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