The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the introduction of the

first

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car on British soil in 1888, the amount of cars has grown exponentially to almost 30 million automobiles in 2000.

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I do agree alternative ways of

transportation

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should be promoted. I think using laws to

restric

place restrictions on

restrict

its

ownership

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own

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is a bridge too far. The massive number of cars driving around the United Kingdom has resulted in multiple problems.

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more and more evidence emerges about the harmful effects of car emissions. Just one example

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is

the respiratory problems affecting children who

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need to be hospitalized and have multiple visits to the

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Secondly do

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Secondly, do

all

thes

plural of "this"

these

the

this

vehicules

a conveyance that transports people or objects

vehicles

create lots of traffic jams and car accidents. One way to resolve these problems is by promoting alternative ways of

transportation

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. While for short distances

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can be by bike or even by foot, for longer distances there is public

transportation

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. The government has an important role in attracting people in

chosing

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

choosing

chasing

causing

other forms of transport by

lauching

the act of moving a newly built vessel into the water for the first time

launching

campaigns and making public

transportation

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more accessible.

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it would be possible to reduce the

numer

the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals

number

os cars

an annual award by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences for achievements in motion picture production and performance

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by regulating who can use or buy a

cars

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car

. In my personal

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opinion, however

opinion however

,

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would do nothing else than create protest and result in only rich people having cars.

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, positive reinforcement is far more effective than restrictions. In conclusion, cars are crowding the United Kingdom, which is why alternative ways to move around should be promoted and made easily accessible to everyone. Restricting the

uso

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

use

of cars through

laws

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laws, however

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is not a good plan of action.