Write a letter to company which supplies the equipment in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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I am writing to bring to your attention

about

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apply

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the service request I made

last

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few days ago regarding my

laptop

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charger

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malfunctioning. I purchased 15 volts fast

charger

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for my

laptop

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last

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week.

Although

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it worked fine for a week,

then

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after it stopped working due to which I was not able to charge my

laptop

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anymore. Currently,

this

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issue is blocking my work to take online meetings because I could not use my

laptop

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without

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charger

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a charger

the charger

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, I am afraid that I won't be able to work from home and complete my assignments on time if

this

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problem persists

long

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time. Due to

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this

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we won't be able to deliver the product to our clients within the deadline. Would it be possible to expedite my request to fix

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issue within

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a week? I suggest

to replace

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the

charger

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with a new one in order not to repeat

this

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issue in future.

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However

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if you could not find a new one, I am

also

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flexible to take a used

charger

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which

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that

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is in good working condition.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

179 words

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Write a letter to company which supplies the equipment in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

The Greeting

Some children speand a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people say economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger, while others say economic growth is damaging the environment and must stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (Society)

The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only governments actions can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree

“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.