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nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face .is it a negative or positive development?

#people #socialise #face #development
The advancements in
sophisticatd
having or appealing to those having worldly knowledge and refinement and savoir-faire
sophisticated
 technology
has been seen
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have been seen
 in the field of communication. People spend their maximum time by using social networking sites
instead
 of meeting in person.
However
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 according to my opinion
this
 trend could result in a negative development. One serious problem of socialising online is isolation. Spending straight hours while using
such
 sites could make a person introvert
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indifference and potential to various harmful health complications. People entangled with the
intrenet
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
intent
intranet
 never spend time with their immediate family members as well as in
community
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the community
, which might
stems
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stem
 to the loss of warmth in their relationships. Before the internet, people would prefer to meet outside in cafes
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restaurants and relish their get
togethers
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
 to a great extent extent
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which is a missing part in today's relationship.
Furthermore
, friendships
on
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in
 the social media can be considered as fake
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As, on these online applications
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it is not an uphill task to prettify any social account.The user can make a sham account
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can add false characteristics to enhance their personality, which will easily attract others.
This
 is to say
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teenagers who are impressionable can become victims of various dangerous situations.To illustrate
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cybercrime
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cyber crime
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cyberbulling
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theft
etcetera are
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etcetera, are
 some of the evident cases which are witnessed online. In conclusion
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although
internet
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the internet
 has enriched the lives of
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the people
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but it's
overusage
 can markedly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 their health relations and even could
leads
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lead
 to insecurity
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 It is quite vital to limit the usage of virtual communication to preserve the genuine value of relations by sparing more time by physical interactions with our close ones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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