In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The right
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work
it
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is fundamental for human beings and
age
shouldn’t influence a
job
application. It is true that
age
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is sometimes an important
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for selecting a candidate in some companies,
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I argue that it is illegal and has a negative impact
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modern society.
Firstly
,
age
is not an indicator
that
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someone’s ability or potential decrease.
Therefore
, treating a candidate less favourable based on their
age
is unfair. As an illustration, let’s take a particular elderly worker, it may be tough that has less manual strength and concentration than a youngster, but how can someone evaluate his skills without giving
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chance to try?
At the end
of the day when a person applies for a
job
knows his limits and abilities.
On the other hand
, when a young inexperienced person applies for the first time, is driven by ambition and motivation and has all the resources to succeed in that
job
.
Moreover
, if a society discriminates
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workforce based on their
age
,
then
it will stain the public reputation. Suggesting that
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is mostly dependent on social services. Working in a good quality
job
keeps us active and financially secure. A key issue is that people with health conditions don’t get the support they need at
work
– often simple things like flexibility at
work
. A snap solution could be to include a higher participation of young people among old ones.
This
will enhance competition,
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to a better match
among
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between
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workers and
the
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talent
fructified
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.
To sum up
, the government and
work
organization
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ought to be alert,
having
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have
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a
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apply
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strong legislation against
age
discrimination and give employers more choices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age discrimination
  • inclusive workplace
  • workplace diversity
  • workforce experience
  • equality in hiring
  • age-related stereotypes
  • demographic changes
  • economic growth
  • social security systems
  • consumer spending
  • non-discriminatory policies
  • bias
  • fair practices
  • retirement age
  • intergenerational collaboration
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