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Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

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Nowadays
,
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,
there are a variety of controversial opinions for choosing the best accommodation in terms of nurturing children. It is sometimes argued that living in the urban areas is more appropriate compared to suburban areas.
In contrast
, others prefer to choose rural areas as the more proper choice. There are several benefits and drawbacks are going to be mentioned in
this
 essay. On the one hand, many advantages based on
this
plural of "this"
these
 two choices exist.Children can utilize vast facilities related to advanced technologies in the urban areas. More proper conditions have been provided in the case of their education. Public transportation can assist them in order to
more convenient
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more conveniently
transfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
 during the day,
however more
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however, more
 security and lower daily expenditure
are
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is
 some remarkable great points of
suburbans
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Suburbans
. The lower population leads to unpolluted air and
more healthy
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healthier
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
.
On the other hand
, massive populace and polluted air conditions are the handicaps of bringing up in the cities.
Moreover
, high
expences
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
experiences
also
 result from it
,
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,
while
transfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
 is extremely harder due to the lack of public transport in the country sides.
Furthermore
, the absence of some tutorial resources should be considered as the other drawbacks. In conclusion, despite the fact that living in and out of
city
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the city
 has various
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
 and negative
effect
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effects
 on nurturing kids, various
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
faculties
 and high quality educations
conditins
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
 in the cities outperform the low life budget requirement and more healthy environment of suburban areas.
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