Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

This
essay will discuss about the effects of
overtime
. In my opinion disadvantages of
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working
work
long hours
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are
is
greater than its advantages. Nowadays some people
work
overtime
everyday. As a
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consequence, they
consequence they
finish their task, earn much salaries, and assessed well by their employers. In many countries,
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over time
overtime
one our salary is as half as casual 30 minutes salary. Even in Japan, the fee is counted starting from 81th
overtime
in a month. So the companies use their
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workers'
worker's
workers
effort free. Some modern CEO and chief officers see employers who
work
long hours has not enough skills to finish
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the task
tasks
a task
task
in time.
Also
work
more than regular
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hours to bring
hours bring
stress to people and it
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affects
effects
their performance. Some employers let their employees
work
many hours in a day, even during the holidays. So these employers
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do not have
does not have
enough time to spend with their families, friends and develop themselves.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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