Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. why do you think that is the case. what isn the most importing thing to do succeed in life?

Being
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
in
life
does not depend on school achievements.Though schooling is important for basic knowledge and skills.Other
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
academic education there are multiple factors which play vital role in successfulness. Participation in physical activities enhances the skills which are beneficial for daily
life
as you these activities build up your stamina makes you
physical
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physically
strong and boost your stamina and will power. Like,
decison
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
power checked when you lead a team in any sports
,
Accept space
,
you have to make instant
decisons
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
. Personal grooming
also
play a key role to be successful in
life
.People evaluate themselves and reduces the weaknesses and work on boosting
personality
qualities like self-
decipline
a branch of knowledge
discipline
,
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,
communication skills.
Every one
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Everyone
has strong and weak sides of
personality
so evaluation and by reducing negative sides produces a person having
suitable
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a suitable personality
personality
to be successful in
life
. Confidence deficiency
also
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the growth.If you have
a
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an
idea
like any
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
idea
any experimental
idea
try to implement it and start working on
it put
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it, put
your best in it may be later it will end up in great achievement.So always try to think
out side
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
the box.
Scientist
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A scientist
The scientist
and
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
comes
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come
after a new
idea
. Academic education is
also
essential but
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essential, but
to be
dintinct
(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality
distinct
in the world a new
idea
is
needed which
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needed, which
can only come out when you have
distinct
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a distinct personality
distinct personalities
personality
and skills.So apart from academic
education physical
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education, physical
and mental ability
,
Accept space
,
personality
building and confidence to launch a new
idea
can play a highlighting part to be successful in
life
.
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