Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. why do you think that is the case. what isn the most importing thing to do succeed in life?

Being
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
succesful
in
life
does not depend on school achievements.Though schooling is important for basic knowledge and skills.Other
conjunction used in comparatives
than
then
academic education there are multiple factors which play vital role in successfulness. Participation in physical activities enhances the skills which are beneficial for daily
life
as you these activities build up your stamina makes you
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physically
physical
strong and boost your stamina and will power. Like,
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
decison
power checked when you lead a team in any sports
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,
,
you have to make instant
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
decisons
. Personal grooming
also
play a key role to be successful in
life
.People evaluate themselves and reduces the weaknesses and work on boosting
personality
qualities like self-
a branch of knowledge
discipline
decipline
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,
,
communication skills.
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Everyone
Every one
has strong and weak sides of
personality
so evaluation and by reducing negative sides produces a person having
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a suitable personality
suitable
personality
to be successful in
life
. Confidence deficiency
also
have an effect upon
affects
effects
the growth.If you have
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an
a
idea
like any
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
bussiness
idea
any experimental
idea
try to implement it and start working on
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it, put
it put
your best in it may be later it will end up in great achievement.So always try to think
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
out side
the box.
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A scientist
The scientist
Scientist
and
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
sucessful
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
bussiness
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come
comes
after a new
idea
. Academic education is
also
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essential, but
essential but
to be
(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality
distinct
dintinct
in the world a new
idea
is
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needed, which
needed which
can only come out when you have
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a distinct personality
distinct personalities
distinct
personality
and skills.So apart from academic
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education, physical
education physical
and mental ability
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,
,
personality
building and confidence to launch a new
idea
can play a highlighting part to be successful in
life
.

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