Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am again going to stay in your hotel with my family.

Last

time, I stayed for a week at your Hyatt Regency Mumbai, which gave us the best customer service, and the location is appropriate to travel within the city as metro station is in walking distance. Let me share my

stay details with you. My booking number is ABC123.

This

time, we are going to stay for 3 nights in the Executive Suits.

Luckily

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Luck

, your hotel manager suggested us to have a visit to local dance & food show

to your hotel, which was greatly enjoyed by my child. Please let me know, if there are any local events during my above mentioned stay. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Creates

Critters

Yours faithfully, Kritesh Patel

Mon Mar 02 2020

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