Some people think that occasion like Valentine's day is purely commercial occasion. Others say these occasions are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's life people needs an occasion to come out of their hectic schedule, Valentine's
day
being one of them. These occasions have mixed view of their importance
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essay will discuss both views followed by self opinion as crucial day
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Valentines day
is viewed as a true business
ocassion
by many people. Certain something done (usually as opposed to something said)
actions
location
business
community is promoting this
day
just to enhance their business
. Sales of gift items and chocolates are skyrocketing during these days. For example
, a recent survey by the economic forum of the UK shows that revenue generated by the sales flower and chocolates was 120% higher than other normal days. Other different reports are also
supporting the same fact. These outcomes have left no stone unturned to think this
day
as a purely commercial ocassion
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On the other hand
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day
of love
, celebration and bonding. Valentine week has each day
full of importance
. Each day
, and its practise makes the bond between people stronger. Also
, a study on teenagers from Harvard School of human science shows that occasions like valentine encourage younger people to be more sociable and faithful in every relation. These ocassion
not only celebrate something done (usually as opposed to something said)
actions
love
, but also
boost positive attitude of people.
Despite having mixed thought on its celebration, for me valentine's day
is purely a day
of celebration of love
. Although
, we have many others day
to express ourselves, this
particular day
holds great importance
because of its solitude. As the day
of a new year, it is also
a day
from which afterwards, we expect our life to be full of love
. Like the chocolate and gifts we receive and give to each other, we expect our life to be joyful as the day
of the valentine.
In conclusion, despite many people celebrate it as a commercial occasion because of skyrocketing business
, it also
holds great importance
for many other people. As the day
celebrates the most expensive or the abstract feeling which cannot be bought i
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love
, this
day
is truly a heartwarming day
for all those who believe in love
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- although
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