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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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As online shopping becomes more popular now days, the mode of purchasing has been shifted. Some people tend to do
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 shopping online, but some of them resist to shop for
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 in supermarkets. Both
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This
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 shopping.
To begin
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 with, if you shop for
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a meal
 in the market, you can ensure the quality of
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. While you go to a supermarket, you can touch the
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. Some people
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 like to buy
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 in markets since they can choose and compare the
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 with different brands. The ingredients and nutrient label are clearer when doing
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 shopping in the market. For vegan or specialized meal-eaters, it is
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more beneficial
 for them to check the
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.
However
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, it is doubtless to say, buying
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 online is more convenient and time-saving. It is more attractive for people who have to cook after their work. People can just go through some simple steps, clicking on the internet, and
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 pay using their credit card.
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, the logistics are
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 can be directly sent to home within a day. In conclusion, with the integration of technology, online
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 shopping can be a new choice for people to buy their
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. The preference of method in
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 shopping is more based on the individuals.
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