Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loos of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?

In the contemporary world human activity pose a threat on natural life and

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avoid

system. As many

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all the plant life in a particular region or period

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and fauna are

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verge of extinction.

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will be discussed

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problem.

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problem is human habits and their requirements. People cutting down trees for their own purpose without thinking about wild animals and

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trees

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human intervention on natural habitats eco-system

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has become

becomes

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chaotic, which

lead to make animal and plant in

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(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction

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as, people clear the land for making their houses or cutting trees for fossil fuel.

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over population

too much population

overpopulation

is becoming a concern in developing countries. People are habited to burn wood as their basic amenities.

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the large number

a large number

of masses required much more area for accommodation. To manage their

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lives

they eliminate natural environment which is

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a fruit

the fruit

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species

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to survive. For

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be characteristic of

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more and more construction eliminate natural habitats and as a

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consequence, species

species

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unable to survive and they died.

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, there are several

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solutions

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problem

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as, government should

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restrict

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human activity which harm

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wildlife.

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, local authorities should maintain the

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life

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species

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the species

to do

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they can

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make or cause to be or to become

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a Zoo to preserve them. In conclusion, increase in human intervention

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is leading

species

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verge

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the verge

of extinction and over population are major cause. Government can

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restrict

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activity and preserve

species

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through creating

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an effective environment

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Mar 2, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Biodiversity
Extinction
Ecosystem
Species
Habitat
Loss
Degradation
Climate change
Invasive
Pollution
Overexploitation
Awareness
Education
Poaching
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Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loos of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?

Your opinion

Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

As you wish to apply for an educational program abroad, you are writing a letter to a university’s admission department. Ask for both the pedagogic facilities and offers, and the funding options.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this have led to significant improvements in peoples live. To what extend do you agree or disagree?