Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loos of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?

In the contemporary world human activity pose a threat on natural life and
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system. As many
all the plant life in a particular region or period
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and fauna are
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on
at
verge of extinction.
This
issue
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will be discussed
will be discuss
in
this
essay along possible solution that may be implemented to alleviate
this
problem.
To begin
with, one of the major causes of
this
problem is human habits and their requirements. People cutting down trees for their own purpose without thinking about wild animals and
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trees
a tree
tree
.
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human intervention on natural habitats eco-system
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has become
becomes
is become
a
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chaotic, which
chaotic which
lead to make animal and plant in
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
endengared
.
Such
as, people clear the land for making their houses or cutting trees for fossil fuel.
In addition
,
too much population
overpopulation
over population
is becoming a concern in developing countries. People are habited to burn wood as their basic amenities.
in addition
Furthermore
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,
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the large number
a large number
large number
of masses required much more area for accommodation. To manage their
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lives
live
they eliminate natural environment which is
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a fruit
the fruit
fruit
full
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of
for
a
species
to survive. For
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exemplify
examplify
more and more construction eliminate natural habitats and as a
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consequence, species
consequence
species
unable to survive and they died.
However
, there are several
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solutions
solution
to
this
problem
such
as, government should
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restrict
restricted
such
human activity which harm
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to
for
wildlife.
Furthermore
, local authorities should maintain the
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life
liveness
live
of
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the species
species
to do
this
they can
make or cause to be or to become
create
creat
a Zoo to preserve them. In conclusion, increase in human intervention
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is leading
are leading
to
species
to
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the verge
verge
of extinction and over population are major cause. Government can
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restrict
restricted
such
activity and preserve
species
through creating
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an effective environment
effective environment
.

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