Writing task 1 The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration represents the middle band points in the participants
the
IELTS General Test by people of various language classes in 2010. In general, the table describes scores for all sections Change preposition
of the
together with
the overall
mark.
As it
can be seen, the total medium tape grade of Correct pronoun usage
apply
German
Correct article usage
the German
troop
is the highest and occupied 6.7 points. Fix the agreement mistake
troops
In addition
, this
body possessed the top line
score almost in all sections, with only one exception in Add a hyphen
top-line
reading
part, where they step back to the Malay crowd. The table data clearly shows that French language candidates are in Correct article usage
the reading
the
Correct article usage
apply
second
place with overall
ring - Correct article usage
an overall
6.5
. Especially they depicted significantly higher results in Change preposition
of 6.5
Writing
part in comparison with Indonesian and Malay groups, covering 6.5 points. Returning to the details, after French groups with Correct article usage
the Writing
overall
6.3 bands were Indonesian speaking groups, they're the
highest point in the exam was at the Speaking part and maintained 6.7. Correct article usage
apply
Likewise
, Malay society candidates represented the lowest scores with overall
band Correct article usage
an overall
6.4
, and Change preposition
of 6.4
this
is the highest indicator than in the other participants' group in the Reading section.Submitted by klysh
on
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