When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

The issue ‘with the development of the
technology
traditional skills and the conventional lifestyle die’ is a controversial one and needs
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a deeper argument
deeper argument
before supporting or opposing the issue. Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed; I would like
to begin
by pointing out that ‘traditional skills and ways of life’ are not totally vanished from one country, culture or community because of the introduction of
technology
. In many ways, the history of civilisation is the history of
technology
: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some technologies,
such
as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others,
such
as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people would seek to preserve
such
traditions as living in caves.
Technology
will always follow its own
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footsteps, no
footsteps no
matter what we, some people think about it.
Technology
advances because we need it. So there is no
way
to prevent the advancement of the
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technology, but
technology but
we should embrace it positively. The generation of a country is responsible for preserving their own custom and tradition and if people feel eager to save a
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tradition, then
tradition
then
there is no
way
technological advancement will destroy it. There are many cases where
technology
replaces human labour to create certain things,
for example
, handmade sari, which is still popular in many countries.
Technology
, in
this
case, has not destroyed the old
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tradition, but
tradition but
has introduced a faster and less expensive ways to create the same thing. Interestingly,
technology
can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life.
For example
, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online.
In addition
, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmon; it can now be ordered from, and delivered to, anywhere in the world. In conclusion, without suggesting that all
technology
is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ‘pointless’, in any
way
, to try to keep traditions alive with
technology
. We should not ignore
technology
because it can be our friend and support our
way
of life.

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