IELTS Essay Topic: Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people argue that money plays the most crucial role in terms of marriage in an unpredictable world.

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, others consider that individuals should only marry somebody to whom they have strong feelings. I support the

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to live a satisfactory life the best option would be to choose emotions over financial wealth. There is no doubt that love is the best foundation for

strong relationship

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a strong relationship

strong relationships

in the family.

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, those who have warm feelings could support each other and overcome any difficulties together.

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, these individuals tend to share happiness and sadness with their beloved ones.

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, they always feel somebody on their side and

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makes them more confident. A good illustration of

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is the family of the previous USA president Barak Obama. He always told that his wife had supported him and she was the love of his life. On the

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, nowadays, it is thought by some people,

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a well-paid job and a

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higher

salary should be the most essential reasons to marry somebody. From their point of view, being rich gives numerous opportunities

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as delicious cuisine, brand clothes, travelling around the world, buying luxurious houses and modern cars.

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, unfortunately, these types of relationships do not

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long. Eventually, these couples break up because there

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are

no true feelings that help to tackle obstacles during their lifetime. In conclusion, relationships based on financial benefits have their significant advantages

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as freedom of buying anything you want.

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, those who have real

feelings gain

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feelings, gain

a considerable support from a

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spouse. In my point of view, if love is the major factor in terms of building a family, money will, ultimately, come to these couples.