In you coutry, is there more need for land to be in its natural condition or to is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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The world
World
has become
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
mopre
and more industrialized nowadays. Almost every
country
in the
everything that exists anywhere
world
wourld
has a well-developed industry, which brings all the positive outcomes, but carries with them many negative consequences as well.
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Similarly, in
Similarly in
Similiarly in
my
country
, almost every
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
site
sity
has these problems. But the
rural regions
countryside
country side
, is another story. In the
last
mentioned, there were great surfaces of
land
that were left on its
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
natual
conditions earlier and that are
made industrial; converted to industrialism
industrialized
industralized
nowadays. Is quite hard to take a stand on
this
matter, because both sides have great need for better
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
conduction
condiotion
therefore
I kind of have hazy thoughts and it makes me
be undecided about something; waver between conflicting positions or courses of action
vacillate
vascillate
on which one to choose.
However
, I believe that my
country
has more need of natural
land
. I will try to examine
in a position lower than
below
belw
the significant, distinct reasons that justifies my choice which
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are, the
are the
less pollution provided, the need for areas to relax and the natural resources that would be diminished
otherwise
.
First
, I believe that if more
land
would be left
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in
to
of
on
or
o
its natural condition it would be better for the cities. Especially
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,
,
the
land
near cities would have a very
of great significance or value
important
imporatnt
impact since the air in the developed cities is very polluted.
Moreover
, the vegetation in
of me or myself
my
nmy
country
is
describe or portray the character or the qualities or peculiarities of
characterized
characterised
charaterized
with more trees that helps the pollution, by increasing the oxygen in nature and absorbing more dioxide carbon.
For example
, near Pristina, lately, many
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lands
land
has started to be a
site
for
place ceremoniously or formally in an office or position
inducting
insucting
new building and the surface of natural
land
is being more and
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more small
more smaller
.
This
has
wedged or packed in together
impacted
impcted
the air pollution to grow in
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considerable
considerably
amount in the
last
years.
Second
, the areas that are left in their natural condition are
not often
seldom
seldo
a very good
site
for taking a break outside the city. The citizens use these areas to spend a
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
term
trime
away from
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the noise
noise
of the city, to have a picnic
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in
with
on
nature, or to play any sports in the fresh air during weekends.
For instance
, in Germia, which is a park in the countryside of Pristina, in weekends many visitors go to enjoy the countryside. If
this
place would be industrialized, it would be a great loss for the citizens.
Third
, there
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is
are
a many natural
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resource
resources
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for
on
the natural areas that would be
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diminished if
diminishe dif
the
land
would be a
site
for industry.
This
would be a great loss for all the
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cities
city
. The
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
axample
that
clarify by giving an example of
illustrates
illustrattes
the time that has elapsed
past
bbest
this
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
conditin
is the case of the lake of Batlava, which is being considerable to be used as a tourism
site
. When made
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public
publicly
publicaly
, people around
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Kosovo, he
Kosovo he
Kosovo hae
protested contra
this
plan because the restaurants build there would pollute the lake, which is a source of
the act of consuming liquids
drinking
drinkink
area
appropriate to; intended for
for
dor
a great number of citizens. In a brief, I wish to say that
in or at that place
there
therer
are areas that could be industrialized, and
this
would be a great thing for the
country
as the revenues could be used in many
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
arrays
aras
that need to be worked on in my
country
.
However
, I still stick to my
the person or thing chosen or selected
choice
voice
choices
coice
oh having more natural
land
because we are suffering from the industry and we are paying the price by our own health.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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