In you coutry, is there more need for land to be in its natural condition or to is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

World
Suggestion
The world
has become
mopre
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
and more industrialized nowadays. Almost every
country
in the
wourld
everything that exists anywhere
world
has a well-developed industry, which brings all the positive outcomes, but carries with them many negative consequences as well.
Similiarly in
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Similarly, in
Similarly in
my
country
, almost every
sity
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
site
has these problems. But the
country side
rural regions
countryside
, is another story. In the
last
mentioned, there were great surfaces of
land
that were left on its
natual
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
conditions earlier and that are
industralized
made industrial; converted to industrialism
industrialized
nowadays. Is quite hard to take a stand on
this
matter, because both sides have great need for better
condiotion
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
conduction
therefore
I kind of have hazy thoughts and it makes me
vascillate
be undecided about something; waver between conflicting positions or courses of action
vacillate
on which one to choose.
However
, I believe that my
country
has more need of natural
land
. I will try to examine
belw
in a position lower than
below
the significant, distinct reasons that justifies my choice which
are the
Accept comma addition
are, the
less pollution provided, the need for areas to relax and the natural resources that would be diminished
otherwise
.
First
, I believe that if more
land
would be left
o
Suggestion
in
to
of
on
or
its natural condition it would be better for the cities. Especially
,
Accept space
,
the
land
near cities would have a very
imporatnt
of great significance or value
important
impact since the air in the developed cities is very polluted.
Moreover
, the vegetation in
nmy
of me or myself
my
country
is
charaterized
describe or portray the character or the qualities or peculiarities of
characterized
characterised
with more trees that helps the pollution, by increasing the oxygen in nature and absorbing more dioxide carbon.
For example
, near Pristina, lately, many
land
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lands
has started to be a
site
for
insucting
place ceremoniously or formally in an office or position
inducting
new building and the surface of natural
land
is being more and
more smaller
Suggestion
more small
.
This
has
impcted
wedged or packed in together
impacted
the air pollution to grow in
considerably
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considerable
amount in the
last
years.
Second
, the areas that are left in their natural condition are
seldo
not often
seldom
a very good
site
for taking a break outside the city. The citizens use these areas to spend a
trime
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
term
away from
noise
Suggestion
the noise
of the city, to have a picnic
on
Suggestion
in
with
nature, or to play any sports in the fresh air during weekends.
For instance
, in Germia, which is a park in the countryside of Pristina, in weekends many visitors go to enjoy the countryside. If
this
place would be industrialized, it would be a great loss for the citizens.
Third
, there
are
Suggestion
is
a many natural
resources
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resource
on
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for
the natural areas that would be
diminishe dif
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diminished if
the
land
would be a
site
for industry.
This
would be a great loss for all the
city
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cities
. The
axample
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
that
illustrattes
clarify by giving an example of
illustrates
bbest
the time that has elapsed
past
this
conditin
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
is the case of the lake of Batlava, which is being considerable to be used as a tourism
site
. When made
publicaly
Suggestion
public
publicly
, people around
Kosovo hae
Accept comma addition
Kosovo, he
Kosovo he
protested contra
this
plan because the restaurants build there would pollute the lake, which is a source of
drinkink
the act of consuming liquids
drinking
area
dor
appropriate to; intended for
for
a great number of citizens. In a brief, I wish to say that
therer
in or at that place
there
are areas that could be industrialized, and
this
would be a great thing for the
country
as the revenues could be used in many
aras
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
arrays
that need to be worked on in my
country
.
However
, I still stick to my
coice
the person or thing chosen or selected
choice
voice
choices
oh having more natural
land
because we are suffering from the industry and we are paying the price by our own health.

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Example:

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