Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every human
the state or fact of existing
being
beings
beeing
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has
have
different types of personalities, opinions, preferences and taste.
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Thankfully, we
Thankfully we
thankfully we
do not
don't
dont
think the same. While some enjoy working in the same
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corporation
corportion
for the rest of their life, others prefer to
change
from business to business. I think it depends from person to person and on their purpose.
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In
On
this
essay
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
will discuss two different
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points
point
of view and express my opinion. Imagine you have your dream job,
for example
mine is working
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with
in
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accomplish
accomplished
such
thing by the age
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of
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25 I would never
change
to another company. So on
this
perspective makes sense,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
do not
don't
dont
agree with individuals who work in a corporation for decades just because they have a high
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paying
payment
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role, but
role but
hate working there and don´t want to leave because they are afraid. Beside the fact that I understand that people do not
change
work
for the reason that; on account of
because
beacause
the have a high salary and don´t want to go threw financial
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggles
struggle
strugles
.
However
, in one way it makes sense working
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with
in
a few different companies because not all of them work the same way, they all have explicit methods that you could learn and
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
expirience
from them. You should take advantage and gain the most knowledge from different points of view. I think if people get the possibility to get their dream job they should not
change
to another company.
On the other hand
, I except the
a human being
individuals
indivudals
who want to
change
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
corporates
during their
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lifetime, so
lifetime so
life time so
they can gain as much
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
expirience
as they can. To summarize, I´m in
promote over another
favour
favor
with both points of view.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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