In some countries, increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a results of eating too much fast foods. Therefore, government should force higher taxes in this kind of foods. Do you agree/disagree

People are always willing to try different foods in their lifetime,
, they are consuming all sorts of foods. Due to the drastic development of the world, humans
are mostly rely
mostly rely
on fast foods, which take them to the dark side, so, some people claim that heavy taxes against fast food, but in my point of view I disagree with that statement.
, I
believe that making awareness would be useful.
To begin
with, the growing number of people, especially, teenagers and middle ages are suffering from bad health issues due to unhealthy foods. Because those are extremely hazardous, the reason for that mostly, those meals
are only focused
only focus
on taste not
on taste, not
the healthy
, they add more colourings, unnecessary preservatives, and fats so, it gives
nice flavour
a nice flavour
on the tongue,
everyone lures to eat.
all brings dangerous sickness
as heart problems, cholesterol and obesity
, it will deal with our lives too.
For example
, people are in the USA, people are mostly bothered by obesity and other diseases rather than other countries.
On the other hand
, introducing new taxes would not solve
problem, better arrange free campaigns by the government and hospitals will make a big revolution in
, limiting the fast food shops in the city definitely
will help
to eradicate step by step in the future.
, in school teachers teach about the effects while consuming
food would help to slow down
problem. To sum up, sort out
problem rather than placing taxes could help to some extent, but not always,
, political better try to place other measures.
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