Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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nowadays

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Nowadays

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because of Advanced technology

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mankind gets more benefits from it. That, they can easily download music and

also

readable things without any charge.

However there

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However, there

are both pros and cons deciding

such

development. In

this

essay

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I will discuss some of the reasons why it is ethical and some of the challenges to be overcome.

let's

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Let's

begin by looking at advantages of cost less availability of copyright music and books from the internet.

one

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One

of the main positive point is that it is useful to gain knowledge as well as information.

what

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What

I mean by

this

is that if a person click on it for the purpose of download or read

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then

they can listen or read anytime and anywhere

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that is

beneficial for mankind to improve knowledge.

secondly

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Secondly

, it is helpful for the musician or writers to become well known without any effort.

Hence they

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Hence, they

easily earn fame in the world wide. As we

know every

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know, every

coin has two sides.

Therefore

, turning to the other side of the argument

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freely available items create

huge loss

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huge losses

a huge loss

in the income of the other company.

which

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Which

means

this

often leads to the

distroyness

of the company. That

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other companies cannot earn income to run their reputed companies.Because People attract to the freely items rather than the item which they get with money. Another issue of that, some human beings spread hatred among youngsters through social media, doing various negative comments. In conclusion,

costless

music and books can be advantageous if it allows to conduct knowledge and information.

However

, they should be

carefull

exercising caution or showing care or attention

careful

that they should not affect the other Nations.

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Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

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Virtual reality be used as a tool for therapeutic interventions and mental health treatments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people. Do the advantages of this situation is outweigh the disadvantages?

Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:  Describe the problem and why you are unhappy  Arrange for an engineer to visit your home  Request a reduction in your bill

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.