Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays
nowadays
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,
,
because of Advanced technology
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,
,
mankind gets more benefits from it. That, they can easily download music and
also
readable things without any charge.
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However, there
However there
are both pros and cons deciding
such
development. In
this
essay
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I will discuss some of the reasons why it is ethical and some of the challenges to be overcome.
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Let's
let's
begin by looking at advantages of cost less availability of copyright music and books from the internet.
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One
one
of the main positive point is that it is useful to gain knowledge as well as information.
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What
what
I mean by
this
is that if a person click on it for the purpose of download or read
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,
,
then
they can listen or read anytime and anywhere
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,
,
that is
beneficial for mankind to improve knowledge.
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Secondly
secondly
, it is helpful for the musician or writers to become well known without any effort.
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Hence, they
Hence they
easily earn fame in the world wide. As we
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know, every
know every
coin has two sides.
Therefore
, turning to the other side of the argument
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,
,
freely available items create
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huge losses
a huge loss
huge loss
in the income of the other company.
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Which
which
means
this
often leads to the
distroyness
of the company. That
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,
,
other companies cannot earn income to run their reputed companies.Because People attract to the freely items rather than the item which they get with money. Another issue of that, some human beings spread hatred among youngsters through social media, doing various negative comments. In conclusion,
costless
music and books can be advantageous if it allows to conduct knowledge and information.
However
, they should be
exercising caution or showing care or attention
careful
carefull
that they should not affect the other Nations.

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