Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays

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because of Advanced technology

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mankind gets more benefits from it. That, they can easily download music and

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readable things without any charge.

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However, there

are both pros and cons deciding

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development. In

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essay

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I will discuss some of the reasons why it is ethical and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Let's

begin by looking at advantages of cost less availability of copyright music and books from the internet.

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of the main positive point is that it is useful to gain knowledge as well as information.

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is that if a person click on it for the purpose of download or read

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then

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they can listen or read anytime and anywhere

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beneficial for mankind to improve knowledge.

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secondly

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Secondly

, it is helpful for the musician or writers to become well known without any effort.

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Hence they

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Hence, they

easily earn fame in the world wide. As we

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know, every

coin has two sides.

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, turning to the other side of the argument

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freely available items create

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huge losses

a huge loss

in the income of the other company.

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often leads to the

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of the company. That

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other companies cannot earn income to run their reputed companies.Because People attract to the freely items rather than the item which they get with money. Another issue of that, some human beings spread hatred among youngsters through social media, doing various negative comments. In conclusion,

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music and books can be advantageous if it allows to conduct knowledge and information.

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, they should be

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exercising caution or showing care or attention

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that they should not affect the other Nations.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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263 words

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Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up-to-date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Questions: 1.Explain why you want to take time off work 2.Give details of the amount of time you need 3.Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.