The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The
first
grade
earned the most proportion of the money through dance contests, activity
Accept space
,
,
they gained in exactly 23.7%. Where, the
second
grade
came
secondly
in 20.9% through participating in the cake decorating contest. The fifth
grade
earned 18.3%, they took part in a cookie sale activity where the sixth
grade
earned 15.5% in soccer skill contest.
In contrast
the fourth
grade
and the
third
grade
, they came at least earning of money by 13.9% and 7.8%, respectively. It is clear that book sale and art sale
In or at or to what place
where
were
the least activity for earning money among all of the activities

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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