The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first
grade
earned the most proportion of the money through dance contests, Use synonyms
Correct word choice
and activity
activity
, they gained Fix the agreement mistake
activities
in
exactly 23.7%. WhereChange preposition
apply
,
the Remove the comma
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second
Linking Words
grade
came Use synonyms
Linking Words
secondly
in 20.9% through participating in the cake decorating contest.
The fifth Change the word
second
grade
earned 18.3%, they took part in a cookie sale activity Use synonyms
where
the sixth Correct word choice
and
grade
earned 15.5% in Use synonyms
soccer
skill contest. Correct article usage
a soccer
In contrast
the fourth Linking Words
grade
and the Use synonyms
third
Linking Words
grade
, Use synonyms
they
came at least earning of money by 13.9% and 7.8%, respectively. Correct pronoun usage
apply
It is clear that
book Linking Words
sale
and art Fix the agreement mistake
sales
sale
were the least activity for earning money among all of the activitiesFix the agreement mistake
sales
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