More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
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the modern world
modern world
, due to sedentary lifestyle a lot of people suffering from health related hazardous which cannot be cured by current drugs. So that, some individuals believe that people should opt their earlier drugs and methods. I strongly agree with
this
and I will cast light on
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the same
same
in the following writing. To commence with, I discuss reasons why I agree with
this
, nowadays, people are so engrossed in their work due to hectic schedule
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and they do not have time for exercises
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,
as a result
, they become victim of many diseases
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and modern drugs are not an effective solution to
this
, they should try traditional drugs and methods like yoga exercises
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.
Also
, the drugs are less harmful
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which was used in the past times
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In addition
to
this
, traditional medicines are cheaper as compared to modern medicines.People can loss their weights by doing exercises, to instance, a person who is suffering from obesity, he can do traditional practices to mitigate
this
problem,
instead
of using any modern drug of weight loss.
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To
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recapitulate, I firmly believe that people should try the earlier medicines
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despite of current drugs, which are not treated properly.

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