You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. give details suitable past experience 3. suggest ways you might help with the event

Dear Sir, I am writing
letter to the reference of an advertisement which I saw in the daily tribune. I read about the event half marathon on coming Sunday and I would be really glad if I can help you in managing the event. I am already an active member of another charity group who
same kinds
the same kinds
of events every now and
. I read that you guys are organizing
event in a small city where you will definitely face problem finding volunteers to make it happen smoothly. I have been organizing these kinds of events in different cities from
2 years now.
example I
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example, I
was part of the
team which
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team, which
20KM marathon
month. These kinds of events need
large number
a large number
of volunteers. I was the part of the team where they give directions to the runners. Which I think is the most important role someone can play. I can help you in making routes for the marathon and guiding participate about the routes. I hope my experience might help me to be a part of your charity group. Your truly Raman
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