Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: • why you think the rent shouldn't be increased • what you will do if it is increased

Dear Mr John I am writing
this
letter to discuss
regarding
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the increment in the rent. I am very sorry to say that I
am not agree
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with it. As you know, I received the notice from you
last
week. It was written
on
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the letter that
price
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of rent will be increased by 10
percent
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from
next
month.
However
, as per the agreement between
us
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that rent will be increased at 10
percent
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on
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an annually
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annually
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basis on which we both agreed. But you are raising it after 6 months which will not be acceptable. It is requested that please consider my valid reasons regarding
this
matter.
However
, if you do not agree with it
then
I would take you to the court under the act of discrimination as it is against the clause of the contract.
Moreover
, I will vacant the
premise
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and break
this
tenancy by the end of
this
month. Looking forward to hearing from you Warm wishes Gurjeet

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